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E. E. Knight
Ask any editor, agent, or reader what really draws them into a story, and you’ll usually get some variant of “someone who is interesting caught up in a difficult situation.”

So how does a writer go about building a compelling character? It’s not so hard – if by “not so hard” you’re comparing it to juggling chainsaws or getting an IRS audit. But there are a few tricks of the trade we authors use to save us a whole lot of effort and readers thinking.

Now, the most important thing a reader needs to know is exactly what the character looks like. It helps them better imagine the person as they create the scenes in their heads. For that, you need lots and lots and lots of detail, and the sooner it appears in your story, the better. You’ve got to be careful that your audience sees exactly what you do when you imagine your character. Otherwise they might mess up and just substitute someone from their own experiences. What is their height and weight? Age? Eye color? Hair color? Exact skin tone and complexion? You can pass a whole lot of information to the reader right away with skin color, it lets them know whether the character is a one of your principal actors, an insightful spiritual advisor, or just there to do some light housework or lawn maintenance. Do they take good care of their skin, fingernails, toenails? How many times do they brush their hair at night, or when they get up in the morning? Don’t forget clothing! A lot of new writers have a tough time describing clothes. It’s not so hard. Just get a Land’s End or J Crew catalog and do a little cribbing, but be sure to change a few words around so you don’t end up being accused of plagiarism.

I find one of the best ways to get across all this detail as to what your character looks like is to have the first scene in your story be your character waking up, then going to the mirror to look at him or herself as s/he gets washes up and gets dressed. Talk about killing two birds with one stone! This is the perfect place to start turning up the heat if you’re writing a sexy-type story. Does she have firm breasts that are supply pouting, or pouting breasts that are firm yet supple, or supple breasts pouting firmly? Be sure to put in just how they trim their pubic hair-- there are so many styles and fashions down there these days anything from holiday themes to political statements is possible. Don’t forget tattoos! A Tijuana license plate lets the readers know how big a whore she is or if that man really is a rebel who breaks all the rules.

Of course there’s more to character creation than up-dos and/or sack-shaving. You need to let the reader know the character is like inside. Of course you can’t see inside a person without a whole lot of mess and screaming, and that really doesn’t tell you much anyway, but you can give the reader a hint or two by having the “inner character” manifest itself on the outer. Is your character confident? Give him a confident jaw. Haughty? That’s a perfect thing for cheekbones to show. Passionate? Give her passionate eyes. Eyes are handy, they can say or do all sorts of things that give away what the character is feeling as they race around the room looking for an escape or rest longingly on the heroine’s bosom. Conflicted about his mother? Give him a wussy-sounding name like Percival or Edward. Angry? Nothing shows anger like oversized ears.

Now, with the description over the next thing you need to do is let the reader know if this character is the protagonist or not. Here’s an easy trick – if it’s the protagonist, everyone is pro-character. A good protagonist is respected and adored. Heck, even people they've just me like them instantly and will fall before the swords of his enemies like cherry blossoms if that’s what must be. Frequently, they’re praised and told they're special. In fantasy and science fiction novels, it's usually the case that they fulfill a prophecy of some kind that’ll fix everything that’s wrong with the world. Of course, being told that sort of thing sometimes makes them go off and be moody for five minutes or so until they get encouragement from an older mentor.

They’re also pros at everything they do, right away, whether it’s using magic or riding horses down treacherous cliffs or diagnosing bizarre diseases and curing them even if it means the patient has to be dead for a bit.

Now, a good character often has a weakness. Though you should give your character a weakness your audience can respect. Ideally, it should sound like the sort of thing you say during a job interview when they ask you about your weak points. No one ever says “bone-idle” or “the heroin addiction, I guess.” No, you want it to be something like “loved so deeply that is afraid of being hurt, again” or “cares too much about others” or “willing to break all social conventions to marry the man of her dreams.”

Lastly, your character needs motivation for doing whatever it is she or he does. Be sure to base it on a first-decade-of-the-21st Century moral calculus. Your audience can more easily identify with an Elizabethan adventurer if he’s worried about his carbon footprint, or a Regency buck who doesn’t stand for all that Victorian nonsense where women are concerned.

Hope that helps!

Comments

[info]nick_kaufmann wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)
Ha! I started reading this as though it were serious. I figured it out pretty fast, but still, you got me!
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 02:59 pm (UTC)
I figured if I started off as my usual bloviating self, I'd sucker people right in.
[info]booraven22 wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 01:44 pm (UTC)
BWAHAHAHA!

Nicely done sir!
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:00 pm (UTC)
Danke schoen, darling, danke schoen.
[info]atateatarin wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 02:03 pm (UTC)
No sorry ur doing it wrong! You forgot to talk about evil characters, because, you know, they're so much harder apparently! And you can't have a story without an evil, evil character who is evil because he is evil, because that would be boring.

But no, the trick is, right, for a reader to immediately know if they're evil, that everyone who isn't pro-protagonist is immediately bad! And of course, evil characters are frightfully ugly, and often live in horrid dank, places, even if they are kings. And they never have very clever servants, and hoardes of ugly, disfigured minions (because their minions are evil also, naturally). If the landscape cannot support the army that doesn't matter, because nobody really cares about that kind of stuff.


Lol oops I'm doing it wrong too sorry. Not up to the mark of cleverness myself today :)
Happy Silly Day, Sir Knight :D
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:01 pm (UTC)
Gives you something to do in your blog today!
[info]michaeldthomas wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
Boy, do I have some rewriting to do after reading that.

A trick that use for characters is that I just base my protagonist on myself, but only better!

This kind of character works well for establishing conflict since other characters are so jealous of how special he is.
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
This kind of character works well for establishing conflict since other characters are so jealous of how special he is.

Don't go giving away the plot of Brisingr, now.
[info]tailypo wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2008 06:22 pm (UTC)
*snrkchoke*
[info]odiedragon wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
My sarcasm meter detects a disturbance in the force.
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Yah.
[info]zornhau wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
ROFL
(I am standing behind you, by the way.)
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:06 pm (UTC)
Re: ROFL
I hope so, otherwise that's a recipe for a real Clouseau moment with the ol' morningstar.
(Anonymous) wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
This is, quite possibly, the best bit of writing advice I've ever received.

That mirror thing is absolutely brilliant. In all my stories I've been trying to do it with spoons. That's given everyone breasts and high foreheads, so I've only been able to describe smart women. Now, with this handy advice, I can finally have stories with real protagonists in them, like stupid men, or the odd short-foreheaded smart man.

Sitting at the feet of the master, I was wondering if I could press you on this matter. Should the mirror thing becomes cliche, is it possible to substitute a lake or very shiny pane of glass in some instances? If the character is nude, would the lake need to be vertical?
[info]eeknight wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Yes, the lake would have to be vertical, to avoid it reading like a big old trip to the OB-GYN.
[info]shadefell wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC)
heh. Nice job.
[info]woekitten wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
Hahaha, good job. My bullshit buzzer really started ringing off the hook when you talked about describing the character as he sees himself in the mirror.

(Or worse, his reflection in a still pool of water.)
[info]benaforn wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 04:39 pm (UTC)
I'll have you know you actually made me twitch. I know far too many people who'd take this seriously...

*continues twitching*...
[info]raqs wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
*gives you the hairy eyeball*

i do not like being Gotten, sir.

lordy lordy lordy. april 1. I need to go home and lie down.
[info]pink_bagels wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 05:23 pm (UTC)
Don't forget hats!

Nothing delves deep into the psyche of a character like 'the man in the hat'.
[info]barbarienne wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
I am proud of myself that I only got this far:
Now, the most important thing a reader needs to know is exactly what the character looks like. It helps them better imagine the person as they create the scenes in their heads. For that, you need lots and lots and lots of detail,

before I realized this was an April Fool. And I was all set to write a respectful disagreement, too!

Bravo, sir, for gag well played!
[info]newguydave wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 06:00 pm (UTC)
Hopefully any unsuspecting newbies are reading the comments and not taking your post literally. lol Well done!

Conversely, I should try to write some mock fiction and take all your advice literally. I mean it would be so outrageous, but if it was written well people would almost half to laugh at it.
[info]kattsune wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 07:08 pm (UTC)
Hah!

I recently read a book that followed your advice, almost down to the pubic hair, and as I read your post, I was thinking "wow, he's so much fun to read on LJ, but I haven't read his books yet. I didn't realize he's *that* kind of author. Maybe he's making a killing writing Mary Sues... I bet that's the reason... But, compelling characters, no! Tell me it ain't so!... Oh hell. It's April 1st, isn't it. I fell for it. I'm *such* a dork."
[info]gregusa wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 07:23 pm (UTC)
Ha! I see what you did there.

Now <a href="http://www.templesmith.com/faze3/>THIS</a> is a compelling character. Happy AFD!
[info]ellyrianna wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 10:29 pm (UTC)
I was sort of wary, but not outright suspicious, while reading the first paragraph. And then I hit the "waking up" bit and I knew it was definitely a prank, since I put your post about the things for writers not to do in my Memories. At least I finally got pranked today!
[info]ghetsuhm wrote:
Apr. 1st, 2008 11:25 pm (UTC)
Now, the most important thing a reader needs to know is exactly what the character looks like.

This is where I started to twinge. By the mirror, I was sure. I may have been less suspicious had I not already been rick-rolled this morning.
[info]rhonawestbrook wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!


I have missed this side of you more than I'd thought possible.

I love it!

(Anonymous) wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2008 09:22 pm (UTC)
It's like your mouth is falling down a stairs.